Love it and I know how this feels keep up the good work 5/5

Aww sweetie this is soo good... and to who ever its about... i no how you feel life can be a beach!!! lol but this poem was wonderful... it had a great flow and really good ryming! good job keep it up!

Once again...a masterpiece. I just love how you can say everything in such a short way. I want to thank you for writing what I can't! Please...keep writing; you're one of my favorites!

Wonderful flow emma! (teehee)...i loved this and understand how u feel!

Aww hun, I can relate to this right now tooh, I am gonna go to school today though and I get to see the boy I love but it still wont be the same, he's probably over me after how I Acted, bleh, love smucks, LOVELY poem though hehe

Wow emma. Like i said you have a lot of talent. Don't stop writing. I really like this poem. Once again, I like how it told your true feelings. Good job
-JamieJay-