Amanda, Glad you're back on...I'm always here...*grabs tissue and wipes Amanda's tears* you be strong...this
piece touched my heart...*Here's a big hug and words from the heart to say I care....*

hugs, love, Ann

0h.. i havent sp0ken t0 y0u in ages. h0pe y0ure d0in 0hk. this 0ne t0uched my heart. p0werful lines hun keep it up!
l0tz 0f l0ve d0ra
-*x00o00x*-

They will come back girl, don't worry. Even if they don't, someone will.

Awww Amanda I am so sorry, i just want you to be happy....I relate somehow.

I am all alone and feeling weak,
I just look at the sky and stare,
Wondering where I went wrong,
Asking why won't people care?

DON'T ever say that, you are so not alone and I really DO care about you, don't you ever forget hun....Please be strong for all of us, you will get through this depression, i promise yu.

*All of my love, sabrina*

We all have said things that we dont mean and want to take back. This poem is true. I hate when i do that,
your a good writer who expresses her feeling through poetry. i like when people can do that and i can feel how they feel inside.
I read some more but didnt comment, if you want me to then tell me and i will. sorry!

Good poem...i know how you feel...trust me things will turn out for the best....5/5...keep up the great work, jen

Quite similar to the courage insie as far as a topic, but it manages to take on a differnt angle. very well written, and a wonerful range of words used. well done

Ruby