Cry hun, tht was really good, saying differnent ways of suicide, to escape life and what happens like the chair dropping, hullionations (dont know how it spelt :p) i thought it was really good! keep it up hun!
Becca x

It seemed almost like you were writing it as a joke.it seemed really happy with all the !! and stuff.
just write what you feel not what you can.still a good job though 5.5

Noo no your poems really good dont get me wrong.

Good poem, i like the use of words you use. It seems very real. Keep writng!!
Juls

I like it its very good i really like how its wriiten great poem keep uop the good work 5/5

~mallory

I liked it...it was good...just not my kinda of poem...at the end it botherd me cause my cuz almost died like that this summer..other then that its great!!!

DUDE THIS IS SO KOOL.I REALLY LIKE IT.5/5

DUDE THIS IS SO KOOL.I REALLY LIKE IT.5/5