Beautiful!!!! i asolutely love it! keep it up.
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Creative as always Holly, I hope to one day be able to write as well as you! You work is a great inspiration to me, thanks for sharing. Take Care! Brooke~

Wow, really good, i have to go now, but i read one line of ur poem and i just had to stay and finish it! GREAT!!

well done
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Holly,
You're so creative and write such brilliant poems...I wish I had only half of your talent...You are blessed....

hugs, love, Ann

Holly,

This was so beautifully written. You are a gifted writer. Thanks for sharing.

Warmest regards,

Steve

5/5 really good, i liked that alot, it had alot of emotion in it. very good,
Kacey

This poem makes me think about ppl who are colored blind. its a great poem

This is amazing and the concept is really clever. the language is perfect.

Wonderful this is a very unique topic and the way it is written is very poetic.. I love it.. nice job

Well done Holly, a powerfully moving piece with great descriptive flow and imagery. You've done a great job keep up the great work!
Eirisa

Brilliant. it's beautiful. great write.

Hey.. this is some gr8 write.. i reli enjoyed this poem.. it had amazing flow and perfect rhyme.. and the topic was very captivating.. i wrote a poem "Color Blind", but i dodnt post it coz im working on improvements.. its far from ur topic tho.. maybe u cud help me out with it once im done.. lol.. but u dont have to, dont worry..
keep up the talent
ur reli gr8
NannO