Addiction

by ShadowDancer   Oct 13, 2005


I'll cut like a knife
I'll ruin your life
I'll lose all your friends
and I'll win in the end

I'll shoot through your veins
I'll drive you insane
I'll poison your breath
and I'll love you to death

I'll laugh when your up there
and you'll cry when your down
though your screams break the silence

they don't make a sound

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  • 17 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    WOW, extremely powerfull.. Its amazing.. one of your best I think!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Raw.
    It was like it was peeling skin off my body.
    I love poems that make you feel.
    Anticipation for your next submission
    love
    ~Em

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Wow i love this line:
    though your screams break the silence
    they don't make a sound

    amazing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    Another great one. :) *5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by jaki

    Great! another small thing that makes hardly any difference... throught out the forst 2 stanzas the frist to lines rhyme and the last two lines rhyme, but in the last stanza only the second and fourth line rhyme... sorry if you did this on purpose.
    but all in all great rhyme, grwat flow... it worked really well.

    *jackie*

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