Yeah...so is my poem..i know you won't get it...cause it's not you...the poem is about my friend....and it's what she feels...the words are simple...but the message is hers...get it...still confuse...right? I always makes people confuse...^_^

The poem oozes honesty and staying true to yourself! Excellent!

Thanx. i like to be myself in poetry, even if people dont understand what im talkin about, so long as i do

Yeah, very nice. And very understandable.

Good Writing!
beth

Hey, really nice poem, I like its simpleness! It's just straightforward and to the point, a refreshing read :)

Wow. This to me is an exmaple of real poetry. Expressing true thought and feeling, in whatever way is best and whatever way expresses YOU the most.

I love it, this poem is amazing. Most people, myself included, try to 'sound' a certain way because that's what they think poetry is, but it's what you want it to be.

Great job and keep it up!

Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

Simplicity is best,your real self should be displayed in your poetry

I don't no what your complaining about because that was a great poem 5/5