Comments : The writer

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Yeah...so is my poem..i know you won't get it...cause it's not you...the poem is about my friend....and it's what she feels...the words are simple...but the message is hers...get it...still confuse...right? I always makes people confuse...^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    The poem oozes honesty and staying true to yourself! Excellent!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ele

    Thanx. i like to be myself in poetry, even if people dont understand what im talkin about, so long as i do

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Yeah, very nice. And very understandable.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    Hey, really nice poem, I like its simpleness! It's just straightforward and to the point, a refreshing read :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Wow. This to me is an exmaple of real poetry. Expressing true thought and feeling, in whatever way is best and whatever way expresses YOU the most.

    I love it, this poem is amazing. Most people, myself included, try to 'sound' a certain way because that's what they think poetry is, but it's what you want it to be.

    Great job and keep it up!

    Take Care and God Bless,
    Sarah-Joy

  • 17 years ago

    by Zack O.o

    Simplicity is best,your real self should be displayed in your poetry

  • 17 years ago

    by locky

    I don't no what your complaining about because that was a great poem 5/5