I really like this poem!!! You did a fantastic job!! keep up the great work 5/5

Really good!! I'm going to hurry and go check out the other ones too :) This is a good poem, I like the idea and the unique sense about it, very clever! keep up the good work 5/5

Yes, this is very nice, I liked the note it ended on. I myself am also trying to write a story in poetry in a few pieces, but so far its not working out too well.

Good Writing!
beth

Idk how u cood have such a low ratin on this 1...only a 3...well now 3.7 now that i added my 5. that was excellent..!!!
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