Its good and sad!!! 5/5

Hey hun i loved dat one the most..*huggles gen* hehe n yeh i agree wif sarah that's it's gwd n sad lol... keep it up mwa xoxoxoxo

Wow Julie, awsome poem. I loved it. very emotional and sad. keep up the good work.

~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~

This is good

UNBELIEVABLE!!!! KEEP DOING WHAT YOU DO!!!

Great use of Emotion its .. wow jus wow love it !
keep it up

That was pretty heart wrenching. Not bad, it sent a good message and was creative. It could've flowed better and some lines could have been less awkward, but you did an overall nice job. Keep it up.

~rolo

Cool keep it up

Oh God that made me cry. That was one of the most beautiful poems i have ever had the pleasure to read Great job!

Snowboots

Great poem.

Nearly in tears on that, awsome job

Thats sad...i cant belive u wrote that..i wish i could...great poem

Omg i am literally crying girl this is a tear jerking poem! 10

Wow that was really good, sad, but good!!!

Hi!Juls . your poem is so moving that i was moned deeply!

=O another sad poem *wipes many tears*...well done. Rosie xXx

A moving poem!i like it .
although there are several words i can't recognize,i still understand it!
really good!

OMG I loved ur poem a lot!!! It was really good, but it was sad it made me cry!!!
5/5.

That was great, u and my friend have the same mind, she wrote similar a long time ago. well nice job

I really really like this poem, its sad though but one of my favorite poems now.