by RyanSmith Oct 14, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
The Fire of Passion |
I LOVE THE LINE: " UNTIL THE SACRED HEART LONG NOT TOUCH AWAKENS AND POURS BLOOD INTO THE BATTLEFIELD!" THIS IS SOME WHAT EFFECTIVE TO THE READER...MORE DEPTH OF PERCEPTION WOULDA' BEEN NICE BUT I DEFINATLY LIKED IT..KEEP THIS UP. LISSA |