Comments : Home - Confessions of a Broken Heart

  • 18 years ago

    by erely

    Very Well Done!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by deanna

    I love this poem. i gave it 5/5 keep it up i would love to hear more from you

  • 18 years ago

    by shelby

    Wow! thats really good. whoever you were writing about really missed out, because anyone who can write like that must be amazing. keep it up:)

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS POEM. you are definitly going onto my favorites. I love the rhyming patterns, and I love the idea of this poem. I hope everything gets better for you. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Beautiful poem, filled with alot of emotion.

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Excellent poem. i really loved it. how you described what you know a home isn't, then went into what you knew it was... i don't know... it's kinda hard to explain. anyways, 5/5, keep up the good work.
    **lisa**

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Awww this is very sad but yet another amazing poem. I really liked this because at the beginning it shows us what you learned about a house and you thought it was going to turn out a fairy tale poem but then you realized that nothing is a fairy tale in real life. I really like this poem alot. very talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 18 years ago

    by Baby B

    Great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow i luv this poem sad yet amazing! this had so much emmotion! i luvd it..u might've gotten at least runner up with this poem...oh well better luck next time! 5/5 4 sure!
    ~*Who Cares?*~