Keep on going Claire! You're really deep in speaking your mind! You may wish to look at punctuation and experiment with some poetic techniqus, however you have a strong clear felling expressed in your poem which I like. Keep on going, you're talented!

Good poem, the flow reminds me of my own... I will read more of yours.. I hope that this person you are talking about will one day fine you interesting. GOod luck...

Wow babe this is truely remarkable!
nice work!

You dont need critisism don't be modest this is amazing and as long as u believe in yourself ull b brilliant n e way please comment and vote on some of mine.. love to ya girly xxx

I am truely at a loss of words this time. you dont need constructive anything, your poems are beautiful and perfect.
5/5
take care,
Keep strong,
Love Tiffani

Amazing poem! Really well written. You seriously don't need constructive critism! But since you asked i'm gonna say something. You could use punctuation like comma's and periods. You don't have to though, a lot of poeple don't! lol! i don't....its still amazing without it!

Anyway your poem is beautiful!! Never ever ever stop writing!! woot woot! 5/5
~Luvz~
~Angie~
xoxo