SOmEoNE cApTuREd mE...

by _aikEi   Oct 16, 2005


I vision your face like a rose in gaze, pure and vivid in glamorous place. My eyes were astound and my heart was dazed. With thy lovely smile, I was amazed.. A girl like you is extra-ordinary, possessing such intelligence, as well as beauty.. Whenever I look at you, I'm a full intensity and my heart beat increases with such velocity..

Im not a good poet neither a good writer, I'm just expressing myself in a noble manner.. Understanding is needed for this simple passage.. So please! Pardon me if my work is not better.. This I say to you with all veracity because it comes from my whole identity.. I hope you can feel and be able to see my sincere intensions with fidelity...

I really don't know what you may feel today upon reading this short passage with a shade of grein.. I only hope that I have made your day delighted because I made this one in my own special way.....

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  • 19 years ago

    by Vicissitude Of Fate

    Woah ts deep i like it. its very good. keep up the good work hun keep writing yuor good

    Mallory