Comments : Im Out...

  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    Heh, clever title.

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I like the tone, and it flows nicely. Your wording makes it unique.

    "Unless you've been though it too." *through

    Good work :)

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Daniel J

    If u lie to yourself enough,
    The lies will eventually seem true
    Im lying to my true feelings...
    ------
    Ahh. Words of wisdom right up there, and the last line...I can't help wondering if i've ever done that, or indeed, am doing it now.

    I hope not.

    I liked the rhyming scheme of this poem, and as undying blusher said, it all flows nicely. Nicely done.

  • A very powerful poem, your honesty is clear.
    Very nicely written, i liked it.

    xxx cici xxx