Jeremy... this is another great poem... haha and guess who helped you with it!! ME! no jk jk i love you! ok but yeah seriously... I no that you have alot of other poems that you wrote... and they are all GREAT! so yeah put them on here ok cuz im sure other people that enjoy ur writing want to read them too! yay.... you rock!

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morgan

Hey. i read this poem and i loved it. i thought it was great. its so nice how you wrote it about your actual life, i mean some people just make up poems that don't even relate to their lives. I have a quick question though, does this girl have a boyfriend? just wondering because this guy did this to me when I had a boy friend and they boy totally ruined our relationship. I was so upset and now i dont talk to either of the guys. I regret it and i don't want her to stop talking to you because by the sound of this poem it sounds like you love her...and you should only want whats best for her, which i'm sure you do. I bet your a really sweet guy to write this and i hope to get to know you better because by the sound of you poems you sound like an awesome person. But maybe this girl doesn't even have a boyfriend, but i don't know hah. but anyways this poem is amazingly great and i hope you realize that. ( :