Hey, ive been in the same boat, on the same raging river. its tough, but pull through babe, and very good write! 5/5

Love this poem been there know how you feel.
candy

Very dark and interesting. You wrote it really well I like the part about the wrist... that if you wanted to see how i feel look at my wrist. I too have gone though the same experienced and you have captivated the dark essence of the situation perfectly. Bravo 5/5
Carly

Thats a nice poem! yet sad!