Loved this poem! You are an amazing poet. I see that I've made the right choice for my first place winner! My favoirite lines were
Have you ever loved so dearly
That you could not live without
Only to be left alone,
Left feeling empty, and with doubt.
Again, Awesome job!

~Anthony

Hey this is an excellent poem, its very true, i love the ending it really portrays how much u can love someone and it not be returned and how it feels thanku for commenting on mine, im very proud of it & it means a lot!!!
Love
XxFeEBeDeExX

Hey....you commented on my poems///songs.....ya i am a musician and my poems are songs. I just put them on here cause i wanted to git them out...you know....well i like your poems alot...very good...keep doing it...i'll be back later to read more ....hopefully you write more....well ya....i have a band.....i play guitar, but i write some songs for them, but ya....later

-Jesus Crisis-

Awwww....don't give up.... good job! 5/5! excellent!

michelle

This is such a great poem! All the words flow so right. Good job,

Tiffany.xox.

Great poem i loved it!!!!!!!!!

Yes i have! thats all i can say..i cant critizise! i just cant! ur a winner true 2 heart

Again, bravo. i looooove this one. i can totally relate ive been thru so much like this..... but u are amazing. i wish to write like u someday!

Wow, i loved it.
"I don't know why,
And I can't explain it
But my love for you
Is infinate"
i really liked the ending. it was perfect.

Ahhh yes i know the feeling
such a overwhelming emotion
you wrote about it beautifully