Comments : Time to go away

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Aww t0uching lines g0od j0vb 0n this
    keep em c0ming darl

  • 18 years ago

    by Fruitypebbles

    Great poem! know what u going through right now, i'm going through the same thing. Learn to look on the bright side of life~!! =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Kendall

    I know where youre coming from. great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Awwl.. That poem is a heartbreaker. But I still absoluetly loved it. I can tell that you put alot of emotion into it and thats what made it so great! Great Job cannot wait to read more of your work. I would have given it a 6 xox Britney xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Tess

    Hope things get better for you hun... 5/5!

    Please tell me what you think of my poems!

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Amanda...this one touched my heart sweetie...sometimes things feel like we just can't find a way to get through and things hurt so bad. But we have to stay strong and continue to hold our chin up and go on...Things will get better...if I could take your pain away I would...love ya dear heart...it'll be o.k.

    Love Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Katt

    That was so sad but really well written!

  • 18 years ago

    by shanna21

    Hey listen i know exactly what your goin through and i'm thinkin about doin the same thing...i know all about losin a best friend that you thought was the greatest only to find out they were a heartbreaker! and i've wrote poems about it too!! but we gotta find some way to get through to ppl and to hold on! u can add me if u got msn its ballplyr_21@hotmail.com...well i hope you do and i hope i do too!

    shanna21

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    I don't think that I have ever completely lost a friend, so I can't say that I know how you feel. But i can say keep moving on, and I'm so glad that you are!

    if you ever need to talk,
    sammysoda77@yahoo.com

    i luv ya hun,
    sarah

  • 18 years ago

    by sexykiki06

    Dat is da shit i lyk it

  • 18 years ago

    by avery

    Aww i like this poem
    i kinda feel the same way.