Oh its so sad...5

Hey this is really good, lots of "Daddy could save her"'s lol. But it's so sad. I'd appreciate it if maybe you'd chack out my poems. It would meen a lot to me. :D

What a powerfully sad poem. It is well written and speaks heaps. Thankyou for sharing

Such a touching poem, very sad
well done
take care xx

Baby girl! I am so sorry! I wish I was there. One day she'll realize what she's doing to you and your brothers! One day. I LOVE YOU!!!!! Always remember that!

Its scary n its really sad how it this could really happen

Once again wow really really good.

Its so good your so good i loved this ~melissaraye~ maybe you can check out someof my poems i would apreiate it