This is another amazing poem. you truealy have talent especially for someone twelve years old. i expeced you to be at least 17 with a vocab that sophisocated.
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I think this is my favorite one so far...ive read like all ur poems and they r aweseom but this one totaly relates to me. lol. once again..ur awesome

I give it a 5 =)
Really well written, as all of your poems I've read, and nice work on the rhyming, I sometimes have problems with that ^^
Keep up the great work!
Oh, and I really love Gurantee, and thanks for your comment.

Man...you are so so good...I don't think I'll able to write a poem like this...you are one of the best poets I seen in this site...I really can't give comments on your poems...cause they are all flawless...

Omg what an incredible poem! i was stunned, it was amazing! ur an excellent writer, keep it up,
emma xxxxx

Wow. I...I'm speechless, that was incredibly well written, and so deep! 5/5, i'm amazed. I can't find any corrections.

Wow. you are an amazing writer. and your only 12? im seriously impressed.

I love this poem even more then the other one! this one i really like the rhyming you used and it sounded so beautiful as i read it... just amazing... 5/5!
xo adge

Damn... your shit is so deep... and your only 12!!! you havent even gone through shit yet... freaking... when you go into highskool... and go through experiences....you will be not just a great writer... but an amazing one... you should think about being a writer when you grow up... shit you could publish something right now...

Wow. this is really a great poem.As are all of your poems. Keep up the good work.
-Sami

You are one disturbed kid, but you sure write brilliant poems, sorry I said kid, but you wouldn't be so disturbed if you were 30 with the same mentality. anyway, you keep writing I'll keep reading.
Luv Helen xxx

You should read me tuth & lies poem and my Life & Death poem. I think you will like them. 5/5

Wow u have real talent i love ur poems...ive read a lot of them and cant stop reading them..keep writing...5/5

!*~SaRaH~*!