I really like this poem. great imagery created, and i love the interesting structure. well done, keep it up. 5/5

Lol =P u should feel loved lmao!! good jod 4/5 =)

Good poem I like the style you have written in it helps it flow nicely.

take care

Great job....keep it up

This is really good! 5/5!

-DamselInDistress

Very well written. It just seems so deep, and yet very reachable at the surface. I really liked it. 5/5, babe. xx

Beautiful

-k