"Cherish" and "bring" were spelt wrong, and perhaps you should have corrected the i that would have looked better if it was an I, but the poem itself was short, quite simple and beautiful!

Good Writing!
beth

Cute and sweet. definately somethig that anyone would want to hear. it was universal. i loved it.

Wow, that was such a cute poem. It was short, but this time that was probably better. Very sweet. 5/5, great write!

Saiya

This is such a cute poem and i did really love it...it could be longer if u only try a lil bit...this is a 5/5 and thats what i gave you...keep up the great job...

I love short poems that have a beautiful message. Great job!

Keep writing. 5/5

It's short and most short poems don't hold much meaning or interest. However I found this is short but great! Your meter was well done and your ideas well organised. I would be interested in reading a longer piece from you. Great job.

Really beautiful poem.
Simple but powerful, i liked it alot.
5/5

xxx cici xxx

I'm a fan of the shorter poetry, i seem to lose ineterest over the longer ones. But then it is all the more difficult to present a message with such a short amount. You have managed to do it expertly, the message was clear and the flow was excellent.

Awww.... that was such a sweet thing to say.. kept it short and beautiful.. ue words reli spoke so much.. that guy (whoever he is) shud reli count his blesssings :P hope things r gud if u reli meant it
ur rhyme was gr8
keep it up!!
Nannoush

Well i already commented but i liked it....since i read it again it just reminds me of my baby which alwayz brings a smile to my face....keep it up...5/5

So sweet...beautifully written...although it's quite short...it shows how much you love him...nice one...5/5.

Short..but brilliant x

All day I've read poems that has the repition of the word "one". Is that everyone's favorite word?

The poem was short sweet and to the point. It's basically showing how much you love someone with ONE poem.

Wow so sweet words coming from the heart
May you always be happy
5/5

Short but very nice, fun loving poem. Good job

Very sweet hun... Short and to the point.. Keep it up hun.

Short but to the point.. You did an amazing job on this poem...

Wow, this poem brings a wholel new meaning to short but sweet! i really enjoyed your write! well done
luv em

Wow i like this one even though it is short! great job

love always
tabby

I must say this is a one of a kind poem and Ienjoyed the unigue and original format