Another dark piece of writting from you there, which you seem to be very good at. either stanza five or six is my favorite. well done keep up the good work, as i'm sure you will

Brad

Very catchy. It's rare to see poems with a lesson, great job. I loved just how dark and evil this was. It really caught my attention. Amazing way of writting it too. 5/5
Carly

Wow...that was good...I really like it...the way you rhyme...the flow...very nice..and the words you used...well done...

PEOPLE CAN BE DI**KS ESPECIALLY KIDS
THERES LOVE IN MY HEART FOR YOU
CY