Comments : Ocean storm suicide

  • 18 years ago

    by confused

    I like ur poem keep writing..

  • 18 years ago

    by Sharon

    There were just spelling error- but the overall message is soothing yet deadly- I like how the opposites are put together.

  • Well sorry bout the spelling errors they were short cuts

  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    I'll be honest, I don't really get it, but I definitely like the flow and your word choice.

  • This is about a girl/guy desperate 2 leave this cold lonely world. so he/she walks into the ocean during a strom and drownds

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah

    Great poem hun take care sarah x