This is such a great poem! i can totally relate! hun keep ur chin up and the good work! luv Maddison xxx

Aww hun, this verse made me cry "I just want someone to hold me,
To love me and care.
To not be ashamed,
And to see that I'm there." it is so true about my life right now, beautiful poem hun very expressive and unique i loved it my dear, cannot wait to read more poems weeh, great work lubb youu

Nice job love it your amaxing keep up the good work 5.5

This is poem is so amazing!!! i love it. i completely relate to it...and to all your poems!!! just keep smiling! lyl~lex

That was a beautifull poem girl, just beautifull.
There will always be some people around, to hold ypur hand.

Tim

"Strangers are just friends waiting to happen."

It's so sad..:'(...girl i love you and i cared...anytime you me...i will be there...praying for you...k

This is excellent i know what are you feeling, but this is so wonderful

Things keep going wrong,
Crumbling walls are closing in.
Losing the little hope i built,
This war is impossible to win

thats my favorite it is said aboslutly perfectly wow lol this is a great poem 5/5

Hey this was great, sorry i havent commented lately...hope youre doing ok..stay strong xoxox

Ummm are those last lines pointed towards me???

Wow... good poem...i'm always here... u know that right?? whenever you need that little push.
love ya, miss u
xoxoxo

Amazing poem, tho so full of sadness.. i especially like the last stanzas in ur poem, starting from the 5th stanza and on.. gr8 job writing this, i cud feel the negative emotion.. hope ur OK
keep smiling, and if u ever need 2 talk, u noe where to find me
take care
Nannoush

Aww.. so sad, but very very well written, for such a long poem, mind would have been all over the place, but you made it flow very well and handled it good, great job i loved it, and thanks so much for the comments on mine, by the way, 5/5

Dunno I shud hv posted my comments on all these poems from SO long!!!
I totally loved this poem. I was on the mood 2 read sum sad and dark poems so I'm checkin all ur feaured poems. lol
good luck gal
Lov
NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

Awesome Poem - if you ever need me I'm here!