Wow that's a great poem and story i guess... that's great that she/he helped you. Take care hun xoxo

0h its nice t0 hear pe0ple are kind en0ugh t0 help 0thers. neway grEat p0em!
l0tz 0f l0ve d0ra
*..x00o00x..*

This poem has a great flow and a great message. well done!

Great poem. I told you before, you have a way with words, that makes it all fit together.

Tim

Will be waiting for more of your poems.

Hey tess,
your work is really good, you should be proud of yourself.
keep writting and never stop
luv ya *

Hey hun dat gwd dat da perosn helped u.. it was gwd though
luv dia mwa tc xoxox

THATS SOOO GOOD!! keep it up

That was really good. i like the way you use your words and thoughts. Im glad that you got some help form that person. Much love, Liz

Wonderful!!!!!!!!

Its pretty good! 5/5