Comments : Simple:Boredom::You:Pain

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey thanks for the comment. It is a good piece, keep writing and your work is quite good! I love poems that are straight from the heart. Shows you how the person really feels. I'm feeling a little better today. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Ah that is amazing. I look up to you r so much in your skills so much. This is another great poem really awesome. it's so sad because it's so true. I'll be yuo helping hand:P if ever you need though hun, seriously..just pm me or something k?! take care xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Shy

    Very nice, you used words that are not common words but people still understand so is not overbearing
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Gr8 again...btw thnx 4 commentin on my stuff..much appreciated. anyway...gr8 poem. good rhythm...all around good poem!
    ~me~