OMG...I can't believe this...this is one of the best I've seen on this site...cool...I'm speecless.

I really thought ur comments were funny.

yeah, i got part of a visualization there. i need part two to get both! lol.

i really have a hard time doing sequels... see in "Blades of Immortality" it was great but in "Rotten fruits of the harvest" geez iono o_o u kno how to write sequels? comment back a.s.a.p. pls :)

I like. :p i usualy like longer poems but this ones pretty good. i'll give ya a five and check out some more of your poems. c ya.

Well met my brother... great wording..... and nicley put together also

He he he.....evillll...waow its real good..i love it!
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