Can i trust you? (oct 05)

by CourtneyLouxxx   Oct 23, 2005


Dedicated to Sonam

I've never had to question you before
But now i find your trust is walking out the door
I don't know if i can trust you
What am i to do??

When i first met you and we became good mates
I found out your past and your loves and hates
Then i grew to trust you and told you about me
I thought you under stood me and that you would always see

The pain and the hate built up and i started my release
You were there by my side, trying to help me cease
Then we had a fight and you told me i was weak
Now i can't find the trust i seek

I don't know if you are my friend any more
Because i can't find the loving girl i once saw
You used to be my angel and i trusted you with my heart
But now your trust has gone i don't know where to start

I'm not blaming you for my problems, thats something I'd never do
But if you not there for me, why should i be there for you?
I'll try and put it aside and go back to how we used to be
But Sonam you need to be able to put your trust in me

I have one question lurking in my head
I want to know whether to ask you instead
Can i trust you becasue I'm finding that hard to do
I will await your answer and thats all i want from you

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  • 18 years ago

    by vanished

    Wow.. i really liked your poem..i feel the same w/ my friends also.. keep writing.. thanx for the comment!

  • 18 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Nice poem.........if u came up to me and just asked me i wud of gave u an answer straight away but if u found it hard to ask then thats ok. for a couple of months my life hasnt been the same........n i dont blame u for feeling this way......i knw i can trust u n that i neva ment for us 2 break our friendship....i dont even knw y this happend........i tried n i really did 4 this not to happen but it did n i didnt knw wat to do........since then my life has fallen apart even more coz u wer the light in my day n now ur not there then nothing is at all.......u'll always b in my heart but i dont knw bout u.u knw everything bout me n u wer the one i cud speak to bout everything but now ur not there......n im scared to make anotha best friend coz i dona wana lose them....now im jus a nami thats walks on the path of life not knwing wer she will end up.

  • 18 years ago

    by brown eyes and a melancholy smile

    Wow, awsome poem. hits kinda close to home. well done dude, keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    It was very good. thx for the comment. i liked it and could relate alot. def. 5/5 but work on ur flow a bit.

  • 18 years ago

    by Amirah

    Wow very good poem i like it...thank you for your comment!! -Amirah

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