This is great cause the story is basic but then you twist it by saying your not with them then you end it really nice with the whole i cant let you see this cause you can't know i love you...great poem, jealousys a b.i.t.c.h but sometimes its a good thing

I get jealous too...lol.i love this poem. i love poems that have a twist.

I love this poem... I can relate to it so much. Great job!