Awesome poem! Well done. I totally felt the emotions when I read it. Keep up the great work:)

Great sentiment you might want to check this line. So when your scared
So when you're scared

Chillingly good, heartwrenching, touching, and a triumph.

It was good but I don't really understand how death fit into a friendship poem...maybe I'm just slow,lol, but I did like it other than that. Keep on writing!
~Jules

Thats deep and good