Comments : Let me pass

  • I feel like this sometimes and theres no way to hide it...u have to hold on tight and never slip away cuz you never know who cares about you the most....5/5 keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Omg, this is another great poem! It is FILLED with emotion!! Great job! And If you ever need to talk I am here for you! This poem hit my heart, because I feel like that too... keep up the great work! Good job!

    ~BJ~

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Excellent use of words. i totally understand how u feel, believe me. anyway, 5/5 4 sure! keep up the gr8 work!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    Deeply sad. Im very sorry that you had to go through this kind of pain. Its so much easier to say, keep your head up. But really thats the only thing u can do. I promise there will be brighter days. Life for me, as bad as it could be at a present time is worth living out because you never know what kind of amazing thing may happen. I believe that everything happens for a reason. Im not saying that bad things were meant to be, but im saying that the outcome of any circumstance can be good, if given the right kind of effort. I really like this poem.

    Ana*