Comments : Another Empty Bottle

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachele

    I love that. Especially the ending. Great Job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Julie S.H.

    Another nice poem of yours!
    very well written
    keep it up!
    x

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Such a sad poem full of pain and words of someone who seems so fedup from the bitterness of this world.
    thats filled up with lonesome and depression.
    you talk sadness in actually a very sad way.
    and ur words are simple enough to get ppl feel the relation between ur work and their own feelings.

    well done over this
    my fav :
    Not much more I Can take
    The end isn't too far away
    It's just become too much
    To face another day

    and one suggestion..ur last line needs to be changed cause ur poem flowed so well..but that line was a bit off the edge.

    another gr8 writing with deep emotions.
    5/5