*sniff* this poem is so gud.. omg i cant believe how gud it is.. even tho u used simple words, it just said it all.. it was deep and very emotional.. and the fact that u called it 2:13 jus made it all the more heart-breaking.. absolutely amazing.. i think this is my fav poem 4 u so far..
keep it up sweetie and im sorry if its true
take care
Nannoush

This is such an odd poem...Its something new and its refreshing. X

How sad. But it's really well written. I'd like to read your other poems but I'm on a school computer so I can't, read any love poems. Can you make some poems other than about love. Cause that would be awesome! Thanks! :)

Really really good poem, its so sad but its amazing that you have some relation still. keep writing, ur an awesome writer. xxxxxx

Fantastic

Omg!!! thats SO awesome!!!
great wording.
fab job
xo
keep up the good work!!

Wow. This really touched me. Wow.. I could.. feel it you know. I can relate to his.. And I just don't know what else to say. I'm just speechless. Very well done.

Amazing way of xpressing emotions...this was so unique..the way u wrote it....ultimate poem indeed

all the best (5/5)

Incredibly sad, it's written so simply and with an almost happy ending that you can really sense the sadness behind it. Your work is amazing, keep it up :)

This poem is heart wrenching. But beautifully written. It brought a tear to my. Although I can relate I have some friends who lost thier fathers at an early age so I have seen how death affects a person when someone as close as a father passes away.
You are very talented so your comments on my poems mean alot to me. I hope you have been able to find yourself again after your tragic loss.

Wow i like this poems you wrote it sooo good. I know how it feels but it wasen't my real father it was my bestfriends dad and he was like a second father to me. But anywayz keep up the good work.