Oh!!! My, girl I must say, expecting teenaged
poetry you have surprised me with a sad yet
most excellent read indeed. A well done poem
with great rhyme and the read smooth all the
way through I enjoyed it and thank you for
sharing.

Great show of angry emotion that may lead
to self destruction. I believe a wake up call
for those in need. We all live days and years
feeling unwanted but time does heal all wounds,
so smile and Write On.

O my god don't say that about yourself...thats just bad...well to tell you something...i used to be called a h*e and all that but in the end it didn't matter i got my head on my shoulders after a while things began to change and ppl started seing me different so my whole reputation has changed since then...and now i'm just another one of those "homiez" but its all good....if u need someone to talk to...u know that i\'m here 4 u...it seems like you got a lot on your chest so i\'m just a e-mail away...
5/5

Thanx much for the comment on my poem I really appreciate it. Even tho it was like my worst poem. I don't like it. Anyways I really like this poem. I can relate. I'm going to keep reading them so expect more votes! Much love...

-♥-Anarchy-♥-

I ♥ Cereal

I will cry...it's very sad and touching...we all go through that...let us just back each other up...stay strong hun...

Whoaaa this is really good...i really like it and it reminds me of something i would write...5/5 for sure
Becky
xoxo

Wow, that was a very powerful poem. I love the line, "Look in the mirror, and miss the old me" I find myself doing that sometimes. I know things may seem bad right now, but just keep your chin up. Keep writing, you do a beautiful job, and take care.
> Kiesha

This is sad...but good...i like sad poe,s they are my favorite, i love the flow your rhyming is always perfect and this one is my favorite cause it has the best vocan out of all of them so far 5/5 for sure good job

Wow. strong, sad... great way to word things. this poem's great, and i think you are too. don't let the sadness get to you TOO much.

Thats awsome!!! and thanks for the comment on mine. your really good
that poem really tells it all.

Beautiful. i felt the same at school. ur got talent there. great work, keep it up

Ruby

Wow, so awesome! Its different, I really liked the wording you used.

All I have to say is that you are an AMAZING poet! You have no idea how talented you are!

Very well expressed. Very sad as well. Please DO NOT ever do it!!! It's not worth it... Believe me.

(((((Big Hugs)))))

Michelle

Gonna go with zjea, i suck at commenting but nice job !

The rhymes may have been very simple yet you made it good. Sometimes even a poem with the simpliest of rhymes can turn out magnificent. Great job!!!

Loved it reminds me of my thoughts 5/5 those who don't understand don't deserve to live a good life I hate people who torment those they don't even sspend any time to know. Comment on my poems

Wow!! really amazing poem...very nicely written.

u r simply great...take care and all the best

the best part is the name u hv chosen...who cares!! stick on it in the +ive manner

Yes you have a talent 5/5

Awe this poem is an amazing painting of your emotions! It's sad but i know of so many people who feel the same, everyone does at one point or another! And thats what makes it perfect, everyone can relate! In a few places your flow was a bit edgy.... Remember in poetry you don't need to make full sentances on every line. :)

Total story of my life. I can relate.

Anywho, great poem! As always.

Rave