All of us are waiting for death...we are brought here by birth...we will leave with death...hey cool...this give me and idea...lol...this poem rocks...no comment...cause it's the best!

Aww hun, this is very well done, very expressive one of the best dark poems i've ever read, aww I hope this isnt how you actually feel, you can always talk to me hun if you need to, im here for ya, well done cant wait to read more mydear, keep it up, lubb youu

Oh... so heartfelt. i really hope your ok, im glad we talk on msn now...not that weve really had a proper conversation or anything...but at least i can keep an eye on you and know your still here. stay strong and keep it together...your a brilliant writer hun xx

I really love this poem, i can totally relate! well done! keep up the great work!! u r such a great writer!!!! 5/5!!!! luv Maddy xxx

All these new poems are wonderful, i really like them...im sorry ya feel this way though and i understand completly, writing is pretty nice though huh? i think it helps sometimes. and this is really good 5/5!

That was so sad and heart-breaking.. it almost made me cry.. amazing write.. once again, womderful rhyme and gr8 flow.. my fav stanza was:

Where you count on someone else,
To look after your heart.
So that it wont burn away,
Deep into the night.

especially the first 2 lines..

in ur tenth stanza, last line, i think and shud be an

i also lyk ur last stanza (i always do!) hehe
take care
ur awesome
Nannoush

Great Job! I like the way you use your words.

I love your poems, that one made me cry. I know we all live purely in order to die, but suicide isn't really that good a way to go. Did you know that thousands of people die in tropical countries every year because they stand under palm trees and coconuts fall on their heads? Didn't think so, but it's true!! So think about that next time you have a gun in your hands!!
:-P Luv Helen xxx