How to get laid

by StMario   Oct 26, 2005


Your kisses, hugs.
Your gentle back rubs,
your smile and touches
Is all I am thinking of

From teasing you, appeasing you
Everyday that I can
catering to your needs
Makes me a honored man

I love the things you're doing
Baby to your hair
your make up, your attire
Your designer under wear

You are the queen of hearts
Ace of the spades
Jaguar of the vehicles
Gold, silvers, gems and jades

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  • 18 years ago

    by SoRrOwFuL Claire

    Very good metaphors and this woman is a lucky girl!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Good poem, i especially liked the last stanza. there was alot of emotion in this poem...it sounds like experience.

    Brad

    P.S. thanks for commenting on my poem...i hope you voted.

    P.P.S. if you like story tellers, you should read some of mark spencers work 'redneck wedding', 'redneck christmas' and 'the wandering angel'.
    My favorite is 'the choice' its one of his first ones.

  • 18 years ago

    by .:.Mandy.:.

    Aww that's sooo sweet lol nice work keep it up! thanks for commenting on ma poems:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovemelodyx3

    Wow,i really really like your poems.i cant get enuf.im just about done reading every single one.I cant even discribe how i feel.Hmm wow.is all i can say.Wow...

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Kool poem. i love the way you used everyday objects like cards, cars and precious stones to explain the idea of how this person is special to you. nice ideas you haev there. you're poems are rather unique also, great work.
    5/5 in all aspects.

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