Comments : You Lied

  • 18 years ago

    by +Fouillis+

    Hey that was amazing.... i dont really no what to say! ur an amazing writer! i loved it... that was heaps good, dont ever stop writing... maybe if you could comment on some of mine, there really crappy but yeh? ta, xo

  • 18 years ago

    by stephanie

    Wow girl!! very strong poem! i felt that way b4 when my man left me and we was together for 5 years! i just didnt know how he could throw 5 years away!! well im over it now! that poem braught it back for a minute!! very touthing!! keep it up!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Paige aka Kayla

    OMG! that is the BEST poem iv read in ages! And i can honestly say that i can relate! Excellent job!! Keep it ^
    Lov Paige!
    Please check out some of my poems! Id really appreciate it!
    thanx! xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Megan

    Beatiful poem...sad but it happens...u put ur heart into it and its obvious...nice use of words....keep writing it'll get you far!..*rates 5*
    meg

  • 18 years ago

    by Adinda

    A depressed but very good poem!
    Keep going

  • 18 years ago

    by seans baby

    Aww that’s so sad I would say not to let NO guy put you through that but Im the same way if my baby would have don’t that to me (and im a cutter) I would not be here im sorry you have to go through that just keep your head up boo you got the rest of your life you fall in love I know it seems imposable but you’ll make it through I know you don’t know me but ive been there and if it weren’t for that happing I would have never found William remember what don’t kill you will only make you stronger *Nicole M*

  • 18 years ago

    by stephyG

    Omg..ur poem is soo good ur so talented..well done! Xoxo sTephy..

  • 17 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Gurl i like that and i also voted for your quote about how you dont get vote but anyways i like this its deep 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Wow! This was amazing. Truly excellent write.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany

    This is very well written. Keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    Oh my gosh!! That's really good!! Lol. It's true though, and I'm sure I'm not the only one that feels that way!! Keep going. 5/5.

    P.S thanxs for the comment on my poem :)

  • 17 years ago

    by sobe

    Omg ur a deep writer n das good

  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Awwww this was a great poem, really sad but i loved the flow and could feel what you were going through

    Great Job