Comments : What if.....?

  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    Damn right! Rhyme isn't always necessary. Poetry is about flow and getting your point across, sometimes rhyme isn't needed at all. Good poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Very nice. :]

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    Definately different I found this quite original and even though it seems to be in part unrelated, I can see how you bring it all back together. Nice job.