You did a great job on dat is cute... don't worry i have poems like dat about a REAL 1st kiss but never truly did....great job =)

Great description, it sounds so insanely sweet! wish my first kiss was like that lol that sounds like the most perfect situation, teehee well thanks for the read great write ;)
love suzy xxx

Ohhh that makes me wanna have my first kiss real bad! I haven't really had mine either, shhh! =) But you're an amazing writer, I hope you keep posting poems because obviously you are talented if you can create a poem like that, especially when you've never even experienced it. Great job hunni!