Wow drew, you're very good at expressing yourself. you did a
great job on this one. I liked
the way you ended it.
Is it really true?
take care,
marjan

Um, yea its true. I consider this to be one if not my best poems.

I like it its peryd good may i suggest leaving out the hey in the last line but its up to you
srry to be selfish could u check out some o my poems

;'(hillary)-';

Nice job on this one... i like ur writing...keep it up...5/5

~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~