GREAT! Wow ur work is so good..i should just throw all my work away from reading ur great work!!! I like the style of this poem like how its written. good good good!!
Juls

U repeated things so much it didnt have as big effect as u wanted...it was good but i can tell u can do better. i feel like ur holding back on this one...u need to broaden ur vocab a bit too! thx for ur comment,
love ya lots,
sore

U repeated things so much it didnt have as big effect as u wanted...it was good but i can tell u can do better. i feel like ur holding back on this one...u need to broaden ur vocab a bit too! thx for ur comment,
love ya lots,
sore

I like how you expressed yourself with this one

5/5 for meaning and for it being so unique

Beautifully written. 5/5