Comments : What it could of been:OCt272005

  • 18 years ago

    by keke

    Yo poem was real good i could really relate 2 yo poem..holla..

  • 18 years ago

    by A Bnormal

    I know exactly how you feel, only mi anniv. would have been Oct. 10th. Very well written to express how you feel. Great job!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0hhh sweetie this 0ne really t0uched my heart deep. im s0rry things turned 0ut like that. very well written but. keep it up
    l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Ohhh thats really sad!! but its very good, too. I hope everything gets better! Keep your chin up, and I'm sure that you guys will be together one day. And if not, then you will find someone else who you can love just as much or even more!! Great job, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Oh...so sorry to hear that...instead of feeling miserable...why don't you find a guy who will appreciate you instead of making you feel bad...keep your heads up hun...you will find your prince charming soon...

  • I've been through that, but you get over it... it gets easier in time... honest !!!
    Anywayz, great poem, i liked it alot, it's very sweet. There's a great choice of words that expresses you really well.

    Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

    xxx cici xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Delanea

    Great poem im so sorry for what happen to you im sorry u didnt get what you want but maybe youll find someone new!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aw hun, like i said before if you ever need to talk im here, i know love hurts and its hard but something beautiful such as your wonderful poetry can come out of this whole situation, hope you're doing ok dont forget you're too good for that boy anyway, keep your head up high soldier,

  • 18 years ago

    by xxxFull Of Painxxx

    Funny how life screws us in the littlest ways huh..it jus sucks..jus wanted 2 say i kno what ur goin thru and one day things will get better eventually

  • 18 years ago

    by chantelle nicole

    Love it

  • 18 years ago

    by desiree

    I really enjoy your poems sweet heart!! keep up the good work
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by lilia

    I can relate to this so much, i went through the same thing as this, but i eventually got over it. so dont worry so will you. but over all GREAT poem, please check out mine. thanks

  • 18 years ago

    by `*~1-lUv~*`

    Gurl dont worry one day he'll open his eyes n notice dat u were the one dat luved him with all of ur strenghts n heart. No 1 realy realices wat they have until they lose it.
    -HUGS N KISSES!

  • 18 years ago

    by LoLo

    Very touchin,nice poem 5*
    see i think thats how i will make my ex feel if we break up but what do you think is better to be with someone who loves you or some that you love?