A very sad poem, but still a good poem.

I wish you'd write something... happy? :]

Thank you for your comment. You really did brighten my morning.

God bless you.

Such sadness portrayed so simply. This is a very clever write.

A very powerful sentiment of both sadness and obstinance to me. very beautiful.
Always,
-A

I love the idea of the structure of the poem. Great job!