Comments : Now they lay her down to sleep

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelsey

    My Gosh that's amazing, your an awsome writer!!!! keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by HighPerfection

    Omg i totaly agree with kelsey it was AWSOME!;'-))

  • 18 years ago

    by eternitySOlong

    Baby girl...oh my god. Ummm.....yeah...I literally have tears rolling down my face. I don't know exactly why either; words can't express it. Please, please tell me that's not about you.? I LOVE YOU!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bex

    Its really good even tho its like really long it gets across good point and well to me the poems r the ones that mean some thing

  • 18 years ago

    by Anna

    Wow that was really goo i like it, keep it up girl you got alot ahead of you.
    Good Luck

  • 18 years ago

    by Ixora

    Wow and u said im good..this is amazing...im gonna go check out some more of ur poems and thanx for the comment...good luck

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  • Omfg this is really good my god its so good your so talented keep it up its really good thats all i got to say ~melissaraye~