Comments : When The World..

  • 18 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    I like this poem because its sweet. Its a nice poem to give to a good friend:D Writing wise, its not my fave of yours, nonetheless good job:) Yes, also i agree, the world can be a hollow lifeless shell, it can be cruel and bring us down, but the point of living is finding meaning to the little things, finding meaning to the struggles and hardships and moving past them. Anything life throws ur way can be overcome if u let it be. I believe happiness is a choice ultimately because things and people can bring us down, but its our own choice to bring us back up and try again.

    Ana*

  • 18 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    I like this poem because its sweet. Its a nice poem to give to a good friend:D Writing wise, its not my fave of yours, nonetheless good job:) Yes, also i agree, the world can be a hollow lifeless shell, it can be cruel and bring us down, but the point of living is finding meaning to the little things, finding meaning to the struggles and hardships and moving past them. Anything life throws ur way can be overcome if u let it be. I believe happiness is a choice ultimately because things and people can bring us down, but its our own choice to bring us back up and try again.

    Ana*