Wow i really liked this one...great flow and feeling in it, 5/5 good job keep it up!!

Omg this poem rocked. It was really deep and really emotional which is defnitely a plus. It totally came across as how u were trully feeling.
Love ya heaps, jess xoxoxox
ps. thanx for the advice and comment on my poem thing lol.

Very nice, a few parts don't flow so well but still good 4/5
thanxs for the title suggestion