Awww hun you shouldnt have to feel like this and unfortunatly i can relate. you put so much feeling into this its just upsetting to read xxx

Cool. This poem WAS long, but not boring. I enjoyed it. My favorite part was
"I swear I can hear my body shatter into pieces as the loneliness cuts into my stomach like a hot blade digging its grave in my wrist. I'm shocked as to how my eyes can contain the water my body throws at it, and it burns."

This and the begining. I really enjoyed this poem! ^_^

~Anthony

* Still Listening *

Michelle