Wow very powerfull and meaning full it was great.
About johnny i deleted it i h8 that it afended you i neva want 2 hurt ppl wiv my poems thanx 4 telling me i was almost raped its really scarey i still have nightmares and flash backs
SORRY 2 AFEND YOU
love ya n soz 1s again x x xsexcbishx x x

Plz put a capital on God
i gave u 5/5
great job i love it

Once again, a beautiful poem. i love the way your poem conjors up such vivid imagry. the ending for this poem was exquisite

Ruby

Another work of art, I really liked it. My favourite line was:
I cry out to God asking forgiveness for all I lack
Keep up the great work, and I'll see you 'round the site :)