Whoa, this is beyond words! I'm assuming this is the piece you talked about in the club forum. It's breathtaking.
I really find the way you included English and Science very creative. I've never read anything like this. Oh and the ending, very masterful! Lovely from beginning to end. Take care and keep your head up~Holly

Great descriptive words. i liked this.

Wonderful poem! this is truely just great! i love the conection with the science and the math, that was so cute. the ending was great as well! keep up the awesome work!

~Jacklyn

I get so lost in these words..oh dear angel take me away again! In other worrds this is rly good., nice work. xxLISSA