i loved it!!!! its awesome. i lovesd ur choice of words with expressing how it all related to something. if u would comment on mine 2!! thx

Great poem=]

Beautiful amazing poem. I loved the rhyming and the simple structure of the poem...Keep up your wonderful work!!!

So creative and free. It's like an account of someone learning to love life again. Great words. Great flow. Great everything. Just Great.

Very nice...good job...keep it up